Wednesday, November 29, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #29, 11/28/17: My--OUR--Lyin' Eyes


  We continue as Santiago and Raquel have a heart to heart while the mattress burns.  He can’t deal with any of this.  He’s a fool in everyone’s eyes. He’s got no self-respect left!  She/they destroyed him, his life and now they want to take his child from him!! They destroyed both of them and how can she say they’re better off?  He proclaims his love for Raq and asks what’s the matter with her.  He kisses her.  He says he loves her, and wants to make love to her.  She won’t go further than to share his kisses—with all that’s been done and said and threatened and advised recently.  The kids are watching their every move as well as Screamin’ Mimi de Miriam.  Suddenly there’s a call from the housekeeper that Mia’s been way too long in the shower and Raq races off.  He removes his wedding ring finally and throws it into the flames.  (Yeah, we’re right there with ya, Santi.  Ten points for coming to terms finally!)

  3 Yrs. Earlier:  Augustino and Nacho are waiting for Santi to come have a beer with them.  Nacho says it’s the best way for Auggie to give Santi the necessary truth to open his eyes about Carolina.  Auggie isn’t agreeing.  It’s not their place, but Nacho disagrees.   He’s their friend and needs to know the truth, even if it hurts.  Santi sits down and gives them the grand news that he’s going to be a papa again.  Santi gets up and comes back.   Nacho pushes Auggie to give up the truth as he saw it.  The air and joy goes out of Santi.

Later that night Santi calls Raq and asks if Damian has told her about the argument over at his house earlier.  Nope.  He’s out of town on business and hmmm, Caro’s gone to Valle to help her sister-in-law cope.  Odd, but nothing more is said.  Raq will ask him when he returns.

  At the loveshaque-up, Caro and Dam argue about the kid being Dam’s and how it will be a stab in his eye every time he sees Santi carrying him in his arms.  Well, Caro didn’t mean for this to happen (so she says but Viewerville wonders); this has got to end and she’s told him this numerous times ad infinitum ad nauseam.  They begin to make love but Caro isn’t really into it.  She (we believe) stops poor Dam in the midst of his passion to pack and leave.  She heads off down the highway and he drives after her.


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Monday, November 27, 2017

Caer en Tentación #28, 11/27/17, Lunes: Mrs Robinson to the Rescue


Chapter 28: Mrs Robinson to the Rescue

Why didn't you tell me anything?” Santiago asked.
Because I didn't know,” Carolina told him. “The way I was feeling I didn't want it to happen this way. I had a little fainting spell, and I didn't want to tell you until I was sure. That's all.”
Caro, why didn't –” He stopped himself for a second. “Let me just see the doctor out.”
As he left the room Carolina adjusted to sit up straighter and took a deep breath. She had not planned on telling him at all or at least in the immediate future.
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Saturday, November 25, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #27, 11/24/17: Truth’s come to the forefront, Lies continue to hover


Present time

Godoy and two other officers go to Santi’s house to tell him he has to go to the police station to make a statement about Carol’s murder because he is being accused by Vicente. They then put him in hand cuffs. Godoy tells him his Miranda rights.
Rafa tells Raquel that he can take her to Cynthia. Federico asks her where she is going “to pick up your aunt, I won’t be long” she says.
Fed then gets a call from Mia “Fede I know you won’t lie to me, tell me what is going on with Nico” Fede doesn’t understand the question. She asks if Nico is going out with his boss. Fede says he doesn’t know what’s going on. Mia then just imagines the worst and feels sorry for herself.
At his bosses office she tells Nico that she doesn’t want him to bring any girlfriend problems to the office. Then he gets a call letting him know his dad has been arrested. When he hangs up she acts all moody and says “it was her?” Nico tells her no “it was to let me know my dad was arrested”
At the police station Antonio chides Santi for having gone to threaten Andres because that complicates his situation especially because along with that there is the accusation from Vicente.

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Thursday, November 23, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #26, 11/22/17: What Did They Know And When Did They Know It?


Antonio visits Raquel on business.  He needs her statement.  Mia wants to know what’s going on and why the police want to take her into custody.  “—I went to the company to your uncle’s office and took away a gun.  Give me a chance to speak to this man and I’ll explain afterward.”  Tonio walks into the living room and informs her that Vicente has signed a formal complaint against her and Santiago for his sister, Carolina’s, murder and attempted murder of her husband, Damian.  This is all she needed, but it was to be expected.

Mia goes up to her bedroom and leaves another message on Nicolas’s voicemail.  Nico is having a grown-up dinner at an elegant restaurant with Cougar Boss Lady.  He’s thanking her for the clothes and the meal, and tries to refuse her giving him a lift home after.  All the recompense she wants is to enjoy his smile and his can-do-it attitude.  (Righhhhhht.)  All the while he’s feeling like king of the cock-walk, Mia is screaming insults at him into the phone because he’s not returning her calls.

Crooked Coke-pushing Cop (?) tells Cinthia that she was a fool for telling her big sis about the affair with Dam, especially since it was before they Raq and he were even married.  SinCin wanted to make her understand Dam was not the best of hubbies.  Well, she can’t stay there.  He’s got lots of visitors coming in and out doing lots of things that may tempt her.  She lies and says she’s in control and tries seducing him so she can stay anyway.

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Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #25, 11/21/17: The Forest For The Trees


Laura and Lola are getting coffee.  Well, Laura’s getting information and Lola’s getting screwed by the press.  Oh, she’s there to accuse Lola of having an affair with Damian as well as with Juan The Stalker-Abuser.  And what about Tio Vicente and his relationship with her mama and papa and her papa with Raquel?  After all, he’s just formally accused Raq and Santi of murder and conspiracy to murder (I supposed that’s what they call it in Mexico.)  Lola, upset and naïve beyond words, tells this reporter who, besides believing she sits on the right hand of Dios and thinks she’s better than her husband at detective-work, (--why, she is woman-reporter; hear her roar? )  that Tio Vicente is a vicious drunk who’s always spouting off senseless and meaningless crap.  Therefore she really had no knowledge of ol’ Tio.  And, Raq and papa are just helping each other out to emotionally.  So back off and keep our family and Raq’s out of the papers, the press, tv.  She’s never to darken their door again.  Got it?

Santi finally reaches Nicolas at his new job.  WTF?  Well, Dad, I tried to tell you I’d gotten a part-time job.  You weren’t listening.  And, no, I am not quitting university.  –Cougar Boss-Lady likes hearing that.  She also needs to hear she’s not looking too old and wrinkly these days, even though she’s getting very closed to her use-by date.  She sends him on an errand to a client to smooth the way for her business relationship with them.

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Monday, November 20, 2017

Caer en Tentación #24, 11/20/17, Lunes: Blackmail


Chapter 24: Blackmail

With apologies for the missing finesse...

In some half-drunken edition of the Truth Game Carolina said something about Santiago always comparing her to Raquel, which Damián knew was a lie. It was difficult to determine whether it was that or teasing, as Santiago did not think this amusing. Raquel decided that Santiago had to have been teasing her because she was young, beautiful, an excellent cook, etc. Carolina then went on about Damián, saying that he was a good man, loyal, etc., while Santiag tried to divert this conversation to less personal information and commentary. Raquel poured another drink, saying that this should not cause problems between “intimate friends”.
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Saturday, November 18, 2017

Caer en Tentacion #23, 11/17/17: Raquel is lost Between the Betrayal and the Lunacy


Present Time:
Godoy is outside of the cabin letting Raquel and Santi know that Vicente is going to file a complaint against them accusing them of murdering his sister Carolina. Santi says “what did he say?” and Raquel Says “we have a right to know what he said” Godoy then tells them that “he is sure that you planned the murder so that you could be together, he says he saw you earlier in the cabin together, you know what I mean” Santi then tells Godoy that he is obviously lying he is a drunk and how are you going to believe a drunk. All Godoy can tell them is that they have to be careful of Vicente and of the press, because the news will be filtered to them. Santi then very accurately tells Godoy, that the filtering will be done by Laura because of him. Godoy denies giving any information to the media (but we all know that he does). Santi offers to open up the cabin for him to investigate, but Godoy does not have a search warrant, Santi says “go get your warrant and I’ll let you in” Godoy leaves, and Raquel and Santi are left to feel an utter disbelief of their situation.
At the Becker home flowers are delivered, Jovita is taking them in when Cynthia asks if they are for Mia, Jovita said no they are for you. Cynthia grabs them and looks pleased. Rafa calls her and she tells him that it’s a good thing he called because she needs the supply of drugs; she has some clients that are very interested. He tells her you already have the supply look in the base of the flowers. She does and finds a bag with the drugs. She looks worried. Rafa tells her she is now in and can’t back out.
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Thursday, November 16, 2017

Caer en Tentacion #22, 11/15/17: Guilty in the Eyes of Vicente and So What?

Part 1/3
Raquel is standing in front of Santi, nude from the waist up, demanding he look at her and asking if they didn’t have the right to do what “they” did to them, to feel what “they” felt. Santi is extremely uncomfortable. Fortunately for the moment, a noise interrupts. He and Raq can’t see it’s Vicente, having peeped enough to confirm his opinion of Raq and Santi. He backs up in his drunken haze and knocks over a potted plant. The noise stops and Raq approaches Santi and begins to unbuckle his belt. They begin to kiss unemotionally.
 
There’s a knock at the door. No, it’s not Vic, it’s Rosa, come to warn him that Vic is on the loose and possibly dangerous. Meanwhile, Raq has picked up her tops and locks herself in the bathroom.
 
Juan is at Lola’s door demanding to be let in. He’s in the post-aggressor mode of being sorry, apologizing and promising he’ll never get out of control again. He loves her, he needs her, and if she leaves him he swears he will kill himself. (Wish he would.) Lola puts up a weak defense saying he’s done this before, but lets him in, then falls for his crap, again. (If anyone is dangerous, it’s Juan.)
 
Vic goes to Lisa’s and raises a ruckus. She’s terrified, but hears him accuse Raq and Santi of messing around in the cabaña.
 
Mia and Nico finally get it on and are enjoying a brief afterglow. (Nico must be relieved after three years of frustration.) Nico has to get ready to go for his interview for a job in an attorney’s office. Mia’s insecurities return.
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Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #21, 11/14/17: Living Dangerously



Carolina admits to Lola that it’s her test and suggests to her that it’s best to wait till you’re married to have kids (PSA#1001).  She determines she’s not preggers and calls Damian right away to let him know.  She’s been worried her kids might tell Santiago—Why?  (You figure it out, Dam.)

At the grand manse, Santi has finally finished the kitchen remodel.  He and Raquel are sad to see this day come because now they’ll have to forgo their daily chats and heart-to-hearts.  Santi thanks her for helping him get on his feet financially with the business.  Thanks to her and Dam he’s now having to turn away business.

Godoy and Antonio discuss the fact that both Caro and Dam were alive, and he was actually conscious after the accident.  Godoy conjectures that he must  know who Caro’s murderer was; they also must assume it was somebody close to them, somebody in their inner circle who was extorting them for the cash.  Why?  Because, says Godoy, there were no complaints filed for extortion or harassment or anything else by Dam and to have done that would have exposed his and Caro’s great sin to both families.  Godoy suggests they concentrate their efforts on finding who in their group of acquaintances could be the criminal.

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Monday, November 13, 2017

Caer en Tentación #20, 11/13/17, Lunes: Revelations

Chapter 20: Revelations

Carolina made up an excuse about her hair being wet; she told Lola that she had had a headache and needed to take care of it. She went on about how since she began working everyone is questioning her actions, demanding to know where she was going and what she was doing. “Now you're acting as though you were the mother and I the daughter,” she told Lola. “What is the matter? What's with you?”
Well, it's that since you've gone back to work you have no time for me. You're not around when I need you. That's what is bothering me.”
I'm here,” she said. “I'm here to talk to you. Tell me what's happened.”
Now I don't want to talk. I don't feel like it; it's over. I've solved the problem. Okay?”
Carolina nodded.
Okay. Okay.” Carolina left the room without another word, took a breath, and tried to lean against the wall. Nicolás arrived at that moment, allowing her no time to think about what had just happened. When he asked about Lola, she told him that Lola didn't want to talk and asked him what this was about. He pleaded ignorance, then asked whether she had been showering.
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Saturday, November 11, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #19, 11/10/17: To Damian Lying is Necessary for his truth


3 years earlier:
Damian and Santi continue to argue about why Damian hired Lola. Santi is upset that Dam is getting involve with his daughter and his wife. Carolina calls Damian at this moment, Damian covers up the phone he does not want Santi to see carol’s name on the phone. Santi tells Damian to stay out of his business and he will do the same. “Don’t think for me” Santi tells Damian and walks away.
When Santi leaves, Damian gets on the phone with Carol. She asks him “what did Santi want?” Damian tells her that Santi was just upset about the Job that he had given to Lola. For a minute there Damian thought that Santi had discovered them. But he has not he is just upset about Lola working for Damian.
The conversation then turns to how Damian wants to be with Carolina, and Carolina also wants to be with Damian.  Damian tells Carol to lie down and pretend he is there kissing her all over. Carol lies down and they begin to pretend to be together. He then asks her to get naked, he wants to see her. She puts phone down and begins to get naked, he loves what he sees and at that moment Miriam walks in and catches him watching a naked Carol. He quickly closes the phone but Miriam already suspects that Dam is cheating on his wife. She tells him to be careful because if she can discover the affair, so will his wife.
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Friday, November 10, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #18, 11/9/17: One Disaster Averted, but an Earring Might Give Them Away

What Swims In The Sewer Stays In The Sewer.....

3 yrs. Ago: Carolina avoids an embarrassing showdown with Raquel by racing out of the bedroom and bumping into Raquel.  Damian escapes down that back stairs.  Caro later realizes she’s lost her earring on the bed and texts Dam to look for it and find it or their jig is up.  Raq accidentally steps on it but Dam distracts her long enough and they argue together so that she forgets to look on the floor for what she stepped on.  She goes to take a shower before a lunch date with Gabriel and her hubby.  Dam locates it afterward and pockets it.  He joins Raq and Gaby for lunch.

Caro gets home and Santi comes in after griping and yelling about Dam and her going behind his back with the kids, all because Dam gave Lola a job and he doesn’t want the kids or his wife working.  “—WE are those kids’ parents, not the Beckers!  I am tired of his/their meddling with my family and in my bed!” Caro doesn’t quite know what to make of that last comment.  Santi uses Caro’s phone to call Dam and angrily tells him they have to talk and soon.

Laura chats up Juan and sizes him up pretty quickly as a dangerous predator.  Afterward, Laura has Lola come to her house.  She warns Lola that Juan is a psychopath and is dangerous.  She asks Lola if he was the one who beat her.

Andres bribes an attendant at the rehabilitation center where Cinthia is being treated.  He is allowed into the room and, as soon as he realizes she’s practically comatose, tries molesting her.  (Yes, if we hadn't already guessed, Andy has a very difficult time keepin' in his pants.)  Suddenly she attacks him and the orderlies pull Sin off him and chase him out of the hospital room as they begin to put her into restraints.

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Thursday, November 09, 2017

Caer en Tentación #17, 11/8/17: The Problem Is More Than Jobs and Money; It’s Also Cheating and Lies


Three years ago, at Santi's house, Lola walks in on Carolina and Damián arguing about Cheatin’ Dam “cheating” on Cheatin’ Caro with his own wife. Lola wants to know what’s going on and Dam, the professional liar, covers quickly. He tells her they were discussing the possibility of Lola working part time at the company office and was just trying to persuade her, knowing how Caro feels about Lola finishing school first. Lola thinks this is a great idea and Dam washes his hands and tells them to work it out. Lola says she can talk to her dad, then leaves the room.
 
Now Dam leans toward Caro and wants to talk. Caro wants him to leave—sarcasm dripping from her cheatin’ lips—now that he and his wife are getting along, go enjoy her. She asks him rather unconvincingly to leave her in peace and escapes to her bedroom to think, pace and reflect. He leaves and has to call Raquel to tell her the two-family brunch is off. He has an emergency to deal with back at the factory.
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Wednesday, November 08, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #16, 11/7/17: The Party's Over

Parte 1~~

Raquel has it out with Miriam.  “—You’ve always had it out for me!  However, have some compassion for your granddaughter!  How dare you show me such disrespect in front of her???  If you must know, we wanted to learn more about how and when YOUR son started the affair with my friend, HIS wife, Carolina!”  “—Oh, now it’s my [helpless, prostrate, dying] son who’s to blame for all this?!”  (In a word, Yes.)  Raq leaves the room in a cloud of consternation.  Santiago, with his signature pained puppy-dog eyes and expression, gives Miriam a sad look of pitiable disgust and leaves.  Mia, on Abue’s side, tries comforting Mimi, who explains that if Daddy dies, the family money—Mia and her  brother’s inheritance, passes to Mama and the kids are doomed!

Laura continues questioning Lola, who’s been trying to explain till she’s blue- and black in the face that she was absolutely ignorant of her mom and Damian’s affair.  Laura notes the bruise on Lola’s face and asks who did that.  Lola lies that it must have been Benji by accident.  Laura is skeptical and tells her she can help her out of that problem.   Then she changes the subject back to who was Patricia’s lover and did she know him or ever speak to him?  Lola lies again.  “—Nope.”  She promises Lola total confidentiality, and says if what Patti told her, especially if she and the guy, were her lover (??).  Just then, Laura takes a call and says they’ll finish this all later and leaves.  

Godoy’s at home waiting on Laura to get home.  He wants to know how she knew all about Patti Vargas.  Laura’s asking for her lawyer first and pleading the 5th .  He says to stop kidding around.  She’s compromised a number of his leads and confidants he ‘s been working on with her big mouth.  She’ll only tell him that she thinks she knows who killed Patti and won’t give up her source.  “--Patti must have told you about what she and Carolina’s daughter did together and if she was involved with the girl’s suicide?”  “—They only hung around together in high school.  Here, if you want to know more, then track down Patricia Vargas’s lover.”  She hands him a piece of paper (with his name and address on it?)…..He leaves the room and Laura calls Lola back.  She says the police now have that name and will investigate.  It’s up to you to do your part now.

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Monday, November 06, 2017

Caer en Tentación #15, 11/6/17 Lunes: Suspicion

Chapter 15: Suspicion

With apologies for the abbreviated version; there were some playback issues and I didn't want to keep you waiting.

Raquel impatiently demanded that Damián tell her where he was and indicated her suspicion that he and Andres were in cahoots about something.
You said he was going somewhere and he is here,” she said.
Let me talk to him,” Damián said to her.
Yes. You will be on speaker phone,” she said.
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Friday, November 03, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #14, 11/2/17: Love Shack



  • If your missed the lead up to their tumble in the tinder:  Damian dares Carolina to tell him to go, not to kiss her, not to hold her and then he will.  She obviously is unable to control her passionate self--which this sly, silver-toungued devil obviously knew-- and they begin to passionately lock lips. The Bedroom Ball begins.

  • Godoy and a tech check the vidcam recordings taken at the time Carolina and Damien drove through the toll gate.  They note a black car that Caro seems to recognize and which doesn't have plates on it at all.  "--It's obvious they didn't want to be recognized." Dun-dun-dunn!
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Thursday, November 02, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #13, 11/1/17: All In The Family; Or True Confessions


  • Raquel gets control of herself and pulls away from Santiago's embrace.  They are two adults who can control themselves and must.  She tells him about the keys she found in Dam's possession when they took him to the hospital.  What secrets?  She tells him to leave.
  • Laura cries and accuses Godoy of staying out of guilt and pity.  He tries to make love to her;  she seems to give in then stops abruptly and screams that she can not!!  He's left very high and not so dry....
  • Juan (Mr. Gym Teacher) catches Lola the next day and accuses her of two-timing him with Mike, and making him into a fool.  He guesses Mike's who she slept with for the cash.   She doesn't deny getting the cash.  Was she perhaps forced?  She denies that.  She asks him to leave her the heck alone.  He refuses.  
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Wednesday, November 01, 2017

Caer En Tentacion #12, 10/31/17: Looking For Love In All The Wrong Places


Parte 1~~

Andres makes a play for Raquel's romantic affections.  She replies he's the last person she'd ever fall in love with.  He pins her against the wall with a characteristic bear hug but Cintia races to the rescue.  He's caught between a Raq and a hard-on.  Sin chases him off but not before he sneers that Sin is jealous that he'd never sleep with her again.  Raq is disgusted to learn her kid sis slept with the sicko.  (Ah, birds of a feather, eh?)  Sin accuses Raq of rejecting her and abandoning her at the hospita and really not wanting her to stay at the house.

Santiago scolds Lola for leaving the house at all hours.  Besides, she's grounded unless she tells him what happened on that trip and what the press has got on her.  She tells him rightly that she's done all he's asked around the house and for the family and wants some down time.  She races out the door.

The detectives get the results from the paternity test.  It is as Antonio suspected....

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Monday, October 30, 2017

Caer en Tentación #11, 10/30/17 Lunes: Truth and Innuendo


Chapter 11: Truth and Innuendo

Carolina shoved Damián off herself and tried to calm down. Damián quickly dressed as Carolina picked up her purse and left through the french doors near the stairs, where Santiago was peering in. She gave him the excuse that she had been resting. They walked outside as she explained she was nervous about the new business and needed to think. Santiago was a little confused and easily led to his pick-up truck as Carolina said she needed some fresh air. Damián watched carefully from the window. She glanced over in his direction to make sure he wasn't exiting through the same door.
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Saturday, October 28, 2017

Caer en Tentacion #10, 10.27.17: To DNA or not to DNA


Repeated Scene:
Present time
Santi asks Raquel to please allow a DNA test of Damian to see if the baby that Carolina was expecting was his. Raquel resists, and Santi says don’t you want to know if the child was Damian’s.
At the same time Miriam arrives at the house and Cynthia tries to intercept her but she runs up to Raquel’s bedroom and finds Santi holding Raquel’s hand. She goes into a tirade and chides Raquel for bringing her “lover” to Damian’s bedroom. Raquel tells her what the hell you are doing in my bedroom get out of here. Santi tries to explain that Miriam is not hearing it she has made up in her mind that they are lovers and that’s that.

New scene:
Miriam runs out of the bedroom, Raquel chases her and tells her that she is confused. “I am not confused, I have always thought you were not good enough for my son, and I have just confirmed it.” You will end up with nothing is Miriam’s last words and she leaves Santi comes down and tells Raquel to not pay any attention to Miriam because she is full of hate. Raquel tells Santi to please leave, and do what he needs to do. He obliges and leaves.
At the TV station Laura’s boss asks her if she has anything new. She tells him that Carolina was pregnant; her boss says that’s not enough, he needs something bigger. An interview with Santiago Alvarado would be great, well Laura says she is working on it. She walks over to her desk and finds Patricia who is going to be telling her something, Laura asks if it’s ok to record her. Patricia says yes.
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